Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Cinematic Inspiration


Okay, I'm going to stop watching Academy Originals and write this blog post. Which means, of course, this blog post is about the YouTube channel Academy Originals.

(From Brent Zupp)

I'm watching their series "Creative Spark" which shows mini interviews with members of The Academy of Motion Picture Arts & Sciences. The first one I watched was with Eric Roth (screenwriter for "Forest Gump" and "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button"). The interviews are in short clips that give you a very brief view of what it means to have their job and be them.

This series features a movie costume designer, a film composer, director, and a ton of others I haven't watched yet.

(From SMN)

One that really touched me was Paul Haggis (writer-director of "Million Dollar Baby" and "Crash") letting us see that he really has to struggle to create. It's almost a little painful hearing him talk about how he struggles to write, but for me, that makes it even more moving.

(From Brooke Atwell)

Then, for something fun and different, there's two best friends who write together (it wasn't explicitly stated that they were best friends, but, I'd say it's pretty obvious). They wrote "Legally Blonde" and "10 Things I Hate About You." Their video gave a little more detail on how they write than some of the others, and they're quite an adorable pair. (One looks like a character out of Legally Blonde.)

Anyway, it's a fun little series, and I hope you check it out.

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Starting All Over Again (Ugh)


Last week I mentioned my completed first draft but I didn't mention the MG fantasy I'd been querying and revising for the past year. That's because I'm going back to the drawing board.

Okay, so it's not quite as desperate as that. The plot is staying mostly in tact, but I am basically re-writing it only using bits and pieces of my much revised, much sweated over current draft.

I mentioned some very helpful advice I got, and that advice extended beyond how to write better description and to add in a "want line". The feedback I got made me feel like it'd be a good idea to start all over with the writing process, eliminating a large number of the first chapters, combining one or two more characters, and generally overhauling everything.



It's discouraging to know I've got that much work ahead of me (again!) but I think it'll make for a much better book, so I'm going to plow ahead with the changes. I've been devoting a lot more of my time to writing lately because I really want to make this happen and I'm sick of waiting, and the only way I have to speed the process up is to devote more time to writing (or, in this case, re-writing). Here's hoping it pays off.

Wednesday, September 10, 2014

My New First Draft: Narnia Meets Game of Thrones

This weekend I finished a 71k first draft. I'm certain it still needs a ton of work (as all first drafts seem to), but still, it's something of an accomplishment to plot everything out and get it all down into that first draft.

Photo credit to slynkycat.

I went for drama with the description in my blog post title. I don't know that my YA sci fi can really compare to Narnia or Game of Thrones, but I've got talking (robotic) animals, human-animal (mutant) hybrids and a few other elements based on a somewhat distorted sci fi version of the Narnia world. One of my villains is even loosely based off of the white witch.

Photo credit to Ronel Reyes.

And then, when I was writing the ending, I ended up killing off a few more characters than I'd expected (three total, which is quite a lot for me; I was only planning on killing off one). I've got two point of view (POV) characters, and they've each got their circle of acquaintances, friends, and enemies, and there's definitely some conniving going on. All of that plus the bloodshed led to the Game of Thrones comparison (in my head anyway).
 
So. Now I've got a first draft. I'm going to let it sit and forget about it so I can come back later to revise with fresh eyes.

Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Fun Writing Links And Stories About Rejection

I've been writing away, implementing some of the advice that Holly Black gave me in editing my last book, and trying to finish off my first draft for another book (because I know that if I don't finish it, I'll just have those last few chapters hanging out there, taunting me).

So I figured it was a good week for some links I enjoyed about writing.

Photo credit to Hartwig HKD.

Here's an article on writing quotes from authors George R.R. Martin and Robin Hobbs. There's a lot of fun stuff in there, but my absolute favorite quote (because it made me laugh) was about creating fantasy names. George R.R. Martin says that those fantasy name generators really did not help him. They promise fifty fantastic and fresh fantasy names, and every single name they spit out was "Grisknuckle." I probably should have let you read it for yourself, but that's freaking hilarious. And oh so true.

Photo credit to Nicolas Raymond.

Martin mentions Robert A. Heinlein's rules for writing. Heinlein was a much-admired and influential sci-fi author who won the Hugo Award four times! Here is a link to just his rules. Here is a link to author Robert J. Sawyer's take on the rules, plus his additional sixth rule (which I liked). Heinlein's fifth rule is one that I don't completely agree with (the rule: keep your work on the market until it's sold) because sometimes you need to give up on a book or short story or whatever because sometimes it's just not as good as what you'll write after you've gotten a little more experience. On the other hand, some people don't realize just how long it can take and just how many rejection letters you sometimes get before your work gets published. J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series was pretty famously rejected quite a few times before Bloomsbury Publishing took it on.

Speaking of which, then there's this Cracked article about famous books that got rejected. Just for fun.

Photo credit to Steven Bratman.
In case you're wondering what this photo has to do with anything, this is Colorado.
Two guys made a little town in the Colorado mountains famous.

And because, somehow, rejection has become the theme of this tale, it should be noted that Tray Parker and Matt Stone had a very up and down sort of start. Sure, once they got South Park it was all million dollar contracts and adoration, but they had some success, moved to L.A. and then spent the next two years living in poverty until  . . . they made a Christmas video (in which Santa and Jesus fought it out) which led to South Park. Anyway, the point was, they actually give some cool writing advice in this video.